Reddenhurst, Amelie

[amiliereddenhurst]

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[rs=2]	As kids Alice Reddenhurst and Thomas Reddenhurst were always seen hand in hand, whether it be tag or wizards chess, they were always close friends. Even through school they were sorted into the same house for some reason, it was only in 4th year did they finally realize fate had something to do with it. So it was in there 4th year the Alice and Thomas decided to become more then friends, and started dating. By 7th year and graduation it was clear the two were meant for each other. Sadly tragic circumstance occurred in the death of Alice's Grandmother in there 4th year, and Alice's mother in 5th year. the wedding seemed to be doomed to never occur when Alice made the bravest move of all... she walked herself down the aisle! The two moved into a small flat in London's small wizarding community and settled into a normal life. However, that was not to last when Alice Became pregnant for the first time. Things were sent to congratulate the new parents to be... however the good times were again short lived, when Alice miscarried. It was a crushing blow to both Alice and Thomas. the two went to several doctors to check things out before even trying again. When things checked out all ok... the two started trying again. Shortly after they started, Alice was pregnant again! this time, Alice took it easy and relaxed... on December the 21th, Amilie Veronica Reddenhurst came into the world at 7:45 pm weight 6 lbs 7 oz, and was Thomas surprised it was a girl! the Reddenhurst’s had always wanted a boy and they got a daughter who, once they got home with her, was promptly handed over to a bevy of Nannies, and housemaids to be cared for. Amilie wanted for nothing as a child, toys, puzzles galore for the little princess.Satin and silk dresses adorned the little girl and she was always either at her mother's parties, or sitting upstairs entertaining her self with her own tea set. As Amilie got older tho she started to be schooled in the wizarding arts at home. by the time Amilie turned 11, tho... she was a different girl... no longer would Amilie wear pretty dresses, she preferred to wear plaids and listen to punk rock. no longer were mother daughter days a fun time... more like a drag. a distant mother, non exhist father..... why wouldn't the little girl have turned from a sweet girl into James Potter?! She's named After a French film called Amelie, and no she was not concieved durning said film, her parents loved the spit fire girl's personality and they agreeded that there first daughter would be named that. She's a lover of punk rock, not green day punk, but ramones and those people! she Often enjoys a good fight and she's now got her first child on the way. France will always hold a place in her heart, but scotland is home, She had a chance to go to France to be schooled, but she choose to go to hogwarts instead. She was sorted into Slytherin. She had a good 7 years, nothing eventfull, she Did very well in her NEWTS, and is now taking an internship at the ministry
Goose, 26, 10 years

[amiliereddenhurst]

DONE!

[Isabella O'Malley]

admin comments: goose, we asked you to make certain changes to the application, and you didn't. yes, you did add some things, but i asked you to describe in detail her years at hogwarts. it doesn't matter if they were deemed uneventful - make something up. most of the application focuses on her parents' background. i understand that's important, and i've written 2 or 3 paragraphs on my characters' parent's history. but for every paragraph that i spend talking about the parents, i make sure to dedicate at least TWO to the character i'm making. we also don't get a sense of her personality, which i told you to please expand upon. all i got was that she likes punk rock music, and hates dresses. that's not a complete personality. you also mention that she's pregnant. yes, you may have said in the c-box that in was from a one-night stand, but not all of the admins were around when you said that. that should have been included in the application. you should have also included how far along she is. the freeform application requires so much more work (and words) than the traditional application does. it's not to be used as an excuse to be lazy. this is our final decision.